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ITS A GOOD DAY TO BE ALIVE. A small poem

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Skryace50
ITS A GOOD DAY TO BE ALIVE. A small poem
 
ITS GOOD TO BE ALIVE :-)
 
When I  wake up in the morning and the sun is in the sky
I think to myself, Would I rather live? or would I rather die?
I may have aches and pains and hurt when I walk 
At least there's one thing I  can still do, is sit and talk :-)
 
 
I was just thinking the other day,
WHY CANT I SLEEP ! 
I've tried so hard to count them sheep
But as I'm counting, they all run away!
So I end up like a zombie for all of the following day !
 
My shakes and aches are definitely annoying 
When I'm in a shop or out anywhere
The queue is long, and stress builds up!
So I try very hard to not to stop!!
The way they look. The way they stare
You would think that I was in my underwear :-)
 
My legs and feet ,well what can I say
They give me pain, each & everyday
But they still remain attached to me
So I don't complain about being me!
 
The moral of this poem , is very very clear
I am very grateful, that I am still here
With people who love me , and keep me sane 
I love my family, and I know they feel the same. :-)
 
 
Written by 
 
Shelley Edwards :-)
 
Boyo

Thank you Shelley. Your poem expresses my sentiments.

Skryace50

I wondered if it would be how other people felt., Boyo, 

Best wishes :-)

fedexlike

                

 

                   Hello Skyrace50

                               I think you captured in that short verse how it is when parky gets worse I admire the fact that you remain jolly very like BA and DOLLY, I tend to buckle and bend as parkies punches I try to defend  and Dysky with blackness that enemies friend bring out the big guns DEPRESSION with Awesome Aggression I SOMTIME TINK I AM AT LIFES ENDING BUT NO NOT ME FOR parkies blows I am Fending as my Alien friend  Ddopa injects new strength in my veins and now its my turn as my blows fall like POWER RAINS and crush the evil twins, they are swept in my wake as the lost ground I retake, in this  life I still have a stake and parky will not make me break,so it is,, innit

                                                       Fed

 

Dollymaz

Brilliant Shelley as always............you really have a way with words.big grinclever gal.

As do you young FEDcoolI am sorry you are not feeling so good.....get that loud rockin music on and give it some WALLY!! ......some Zeppelin should do it.........keep your chins up matey winkthinkin of you.

Dolly

Christo

They're coming to get you Parky.

They're closing in for the kill.

For you there will be no hiding place.

You will have to pay the bill.

 

Your days are numbered Parky.

Just see what the future brings.

A Nobel prize for medicine?

It's waiting in the wings.

 

You will be defeated Parky.

Research continues apace

Great minds all collaborating.

Will be sure to win the race.

 

Stem cell research and genetics 

Will ever more powerful be.

The inscription they'll carve on your gravestone?

"Here lies old Parky"---------R.I.P.

 

Dollymaz

CHRISTO THAT DESERVES AN  AWARD.......SO BRILLIANT,WELL DONE MATEY

Krystal

Well done love this poem. xXx

Skryace50

Love your poem Christo,

Thankyou Fed, Krystal and Dollymaz, 

:-) 

hope you are all ok , sending my best to you all,